May I ask your opinion Claire ? This has nothing to do with your story here, but I don't know how else to ask this.

I wrote one I called "My Cinnamin Girl". You use "language" in your own way and it works and works well. That's just the way I talk when my guard is down. Am i being disgusting ? Is it offensive. Is it anything that is negative ? Don't sugar coat it. Tell it like it is !!!!!!!! (Destroy me in one feld swoop-lol)