James Edward Young
1 min readAug 29, 2024

LIMERICKS

I’ve never done this before. This might be fine to try. I don’t think I got perfect but I didn’t do too bad, maybe. Limericks don’t have to be silly. They can be serious too. this is my first attempt and I know there are mistakes but what you think? Why don’t you give it a try and tag me, sort of like this —
@Lelu A.

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FORGET ABOUT LOVE

Love is like money, spend it where you please.

Kisses are playthings, they’re only meant to tease

wrap your arms around me

blessed warmth surrounds me

the tension in my heart, I feel it ease.

I think I’m a natural dynamo

just watch and see my love grow

I touch your skin so soft

please don’t make me stop

I have a secret only you should know

I think that we did conclude

and I risk really sounding crude

I’ve got places to go

I’ve got things to do

but once again, is my new attitude

love grows more than you know

Sorry if you didn’t stay for the show

it doesn’t get any better than this

I may burst from too much bliss

this act is impossible act to follow

James Edward Young
James Edward Young

Written by James Edward Young

I believe in honest true life stories with the thrill of life, romance and strong emotion.

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