James Edward Young
1 min readOct 9, 2023

It Looks Like Rain

Well surprise surprise.
I thought it looked like rain,
then you walked into the room.
I choked back my tears.
Inside, I was falling apart.
I might as well face it
I’ve got you inside me so bad.
I don’t think I’ve ever
ever gottin over you.
I try to forget you by hugging
every pretty girl that I see.
But then I just break down and cry
I think of how we used to be.

This ache inside is so hard to bear.
Yes, it looks like rain and
you have no idea how I hurt for you.
When you walked through the door
the sun rose in my heart.
I don’t want to beg but, only you
can make rain clouds leave
I need to heal, I need you so
can we get out of here and
try to make this pain go away

I love the things you do, and
I hate the things you do.
Love — hate
hate — love
I can’t get over you.
When you say baby,
I say yes, — one more time.
Hurt me and make me cry
abuse from you is better than
the love of someone else.

James Edward Young
James Edward Young

Written by James Edward Young

I believe in honest true life stories with the thrill of life, romance and strong emotion.

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